well Joules
i'm speakless, "Rejoice" is beautiful, you can really write em, hun
the images that your story line gave, WOW i want to see it for REAL
the dances were just so moving, sigh, happy grin
can i ask a small favour tho
can you do a family tree that names everyone, and who their parents are?
it takes me a bit to get names, and tho i have a little idea who's who
a family tree would help abit more

um... and just one thing more, now don't get anger at me but.....
Zorun, why does he get all that sympathy?
he has hurt so many members of the family
but still they feel nothing but sympathy for him?????
where as Mahrayne, who did not hurt the family is thrown out?????
i mean most wife bashers say the are SO sorry after they put their wives in hospital
but they keep doing it
which Zorun seems to keep doing it too, so why the sympathy there???
also did Mahrayne not say that she did not want to be claimed?
and also was it not because of her sister that Zorun stuck his thumb in his mouth
and went off and sulked??
okay so i have no sympathy for selfcentred, selfabsorded, basher, Zorun
maybe it's just me *shrug*
i do enjoy the stories otherwise, they are just so wonderful
keep em comin n you can ignore my rambles here if ya want
i most likely just don't see where your takin this yet
anger managment maybe??
maybe i do have a soft spot for Mahrayne along with the hybrids n all the brats
and maybe one or two others
but sometimes i just gotta say things, get em off my chest
that sort of things
love n light, me :oD